I dislike whatever instrument tone is in the beginning, could be more percussion, what program do you use? Could use trumpet more for heroism also, and trombone, also lackluster ending.
I dislike whatever instrument tone is in the beginning, could be more percussion, what program do you use? Could use trumpet more for heroism also, and trombone, also lackluster ending.
Everyone is so picky around here.
The only thing that kept me from 5ing and favoriting this was the lack of of emotion/feeling in your voice, and the unrealisticness of the instruments, sounds electric, if I'm wrong, needs more relaxed emotion
nice beat dude, I would throw in some syncopated snare at :30 to mix it up, the complete loss of drums sounds out of place in this song. You should also mix it up, or give some sort of build or bridge earlier on, it seems as if you lost ideas at 1:30, and the transition at 2:00 is very boring considering how long it takes to get there.
thanks man, this was probably the first beat i ever made, just using the basic stuff. Not made out to be anything decent really just experimental haha. but thanks for the review brotha i appreciate it.
The drum intro should be much heaver, more accented, and a lot more notes, make it a real solo, which would make the transition around :30 work much better, and little to no cymbal, the transition at 1:20ish is pretty boring imo also, I should slide in much earlier and much more gradually, with speed and higher notes, and with a real piano, 2:30 sounds really good, though it could use some heavy delay, though I can tell a decent amount is already there, and at 3:00, you should use more effects to get the feeling you desire, reverse long tones and other recordings, I would also recommend a choir entrance around 3:35. I like the ending though. Very good base, I would really like to hear his after some changes have been made.
decent loop bro, I would have taken out some of the higher stuff around 1min, and thrown in some more technical bass lines from 40-50, and added a drum track and lengthened the whole thing for more of a song, this isn't much for ambient, but has a good feel that dissipates around :23
damn man, I reviewed 2 other songs so far of yours, and will probably do the rest. I am very happy that you are the first thing I listened to on newgrounds today, definitely never disappoint bro. If I would say anything, it would be to slow it down about 20 bpm.
Thanks for another awesome review. Listening to this again after a while I think I should've added a little more 'funk' to the synth section.
I listened to one of your newer songs, and it was so good I favorited it, and decided to see more, you are really good writer, this one is a bit too bright for my taste though, still a solid 4 though man.
Thanks for the comments man. Yeah almost every song on here is quite different from the last ^^
haha, this is really good man, I also like how the tag high comes before the word in the title :P
Thanks! :]
I hate you. This is not music.
fuck this is cool dude, was missing something though, you gave it too much percussive structure I think, less articulation maybe bro, but cool song
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