00:00
00:00
NinjaGuy

20 Audio Reviews w/ Response

All 38 Reviews

I don't like the phrasing/rubato in this song, pace it over longer phrases and I think this could be really good

ObsidianSnow responds:

Thanks for the review!

I like this, it is not a typical classical at all, really good orchestration. This flows fantastically. Could you have added winds earlier on, I think this piece would border perfection. I wish my speakers could handle the volume also :/ I bet this occurs for many, so maybe start softer? I feel as if more could be happening around 2:15, gets almost repetitive. This is really good music though. I like it. Nothing bad in here.

Zajed responds:

Thanks man i said its finished the more i listen to it the more ideas are poppin up so i might add and change a few things in there. I do agree this piece needs a flute or some similiar instruments and i also could ad a second build up along with the piano at the end.
Thanks for listening i really appreciate it

Instead of a violin solo @:40, might I recommend a cello or bass solo, same notes, just better octave imo

Bosa responds:

A bass solo?

Love the intro, don't care so much for the hi-hat. Generally too much treble in percussion. This is very good though.

ArcaneSoul responds:

honestly i have a hard time picking good hi hats. I don't really know thta many good ones. Plus, i might of add waaay too much high frequencys. So forgive me for that.

I tend to like alot of hi hat percussion because it adds variation to my song. But your right, as im hearing it right now, i did kind of do a lazy job on the hi-hats. Then again this was just recover from my artblock so i wasn't expecting anything too special.

more tuba, otherwise pretty amazing

samulis responds:

lol, glad you find it pretty amazing. I certainly could have done a better job if I had more inspiration and less of a thing for tonal poems back then...

I dislike whatever instrument tone is in the beginning, could be more percussion, what program do you use? Could use trumpet more for heroism also, and trombone, also lackluster ending.

Bosa responds:

Everyone is so picky around here.

nice beat dude, I would throw in some syncopated snare at :30 to mix it up, the complete loss of drums sounds out of place in this song. You should also mix it up, or give some sort of build or bridge earlier on, it seems as if you lost ideas at 1:30, and the transition at 2:00 is very boring considering how long it takes to get there.

up2dtime07 responds:

thanks man, this was probably the first beat i ever made, just using the basic stuff. Not made out to be anything decent really just experimental haha. but thanks for the review brotha i appreciate it.

damn man, I reviewed 2 other songs so far of yours, and will probably do the rest. I am very happy that you are the first thing I listened to on newgrounds today, definitely never disappoint bro. If I would say anything, it would be to slow it down about 20 bpm.

td6d responds:

Thanks for another awesome review. Listening to this again after a while I think I should've added a little more 'funk' to the synth section.

I listened to one of your newer songs, and it was so good I favorited it, and decided to see more, you are really good writer, this one is a bit too bright for my taste though, still a solid 4 though man.

td6d responds:

Thanks for the comments man. Yeah almost every song on here is quite different from the last ^^

haha, this is really good man, I also like how the tag high comes before the word in the title :P

td6d responds:

Thanks! :]

Ayy @NinjaGuy

Male

NYC

Joined on 7/3/06

Level:
20
Exp Points:
4,160 / 4,440
Exp Rank:
12,068
Vote Power:
6.17 votes
Rank:
Police Officer
Global Rank:
13,015
Blams:
98
Saves:
635
B/P Bonus:
10%
Whistle:
Normal
Medals:
428