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I NEED AN ARTIST+Voice Actor

Posted by NinjaGuy Jul. 6, 2009 @ 2:06 AM EDT

I have an idea for a movie/series, and I am simply terrible with Flash animation, and besides that, I have no money to even get started, I can tell already though, I can not work well with CS3 pro, so, I am calling any Flash artists who think they can do the job, good or bad, send your art to my inbox, the thread got deleted, I think it was pretty much dead anyway, but it had some art on it, w/e just use fileshare and PM me the link.

So here goes my idea: A mosquito "player" is always getting in bed with the ladies. So after awhile, he gets one of em' pregnant, she has the baby and hes just always so stressed, so, theres only one solution... getting high! his plan, is to get stoned every time he faces a problem, and in this story, getting high, is standing an inch from a florescent light... So his woman has this baby okay, and his kid notices his dad is really stressed and a bit angry after losing his job at the local blood bank(haha.), so he follows him out and sees him flying right next to a light on the highway, well, he then watches his Pa' pass out and get hit by a passing car, and vows to get his revenge on humans and not let his father die in vein, so is that a decent idea?

Well, if you just hate it, feel free as HELL to simply say so right in that comment section, I won't bash you for criticism, but don't be a total dick about it... So, anytime I get the chance to finish/get started on it, I will definitely post my version of the script for this, which will be totally up for editing, seeing as I will make many typis(<-- joke).

Progress:

Tyler VA: Found someone; Loved the demo, awaiting audio
Selena VA: possiblilites, but still open
Steven VA: possiblilites, but still open
Bartender VA: possiblilites, full
Men outside VA: possiblilites, but still open

Artist: FINALLY, I have a background designer, who may make characters, but need an animator...
Script:complete, please comment it, or PM me about it

Okay, I am done with this script, atleast, the unedited part of it, so here it is:

(Intro scene part one)

*The movie opens up from black, and our main character, Tyler Johnsohn is sitting at the bar*

Tyler:Hey Bartender! Can I get a fresh glass of that cow blood!

Bartender:You've already had five!

Tyler:... and?

Bartender:I just don't think you need to be gettin' all fucked up right before you head home, that's all.

Tyler: Head home?

Bartender:Yes, head home, we close in ten.

Tyler:Ahhh, I don't care, give me another cold one dammit!

*an attractive woman by the name of Selena Simmons walks in the bar*
(Tyler can't keep his eyes off of her)

*Bartender gives Tyler his cow blood*

Tyler mumbles: thank you(staring at Selena still)

*Selena is at the door:Bartender! I'll get the usual!

She sits down beside Tyler*

Tyler:so... You're coming in pretty late...

Selena:Yeah, I ain't got anywhere to stay, so!

Tyler:Well, you could come and sleep at my place.

Selena:That'd be real nice o' you.

Tyler:No problem

(Scene one ends Here)
(scene two begins here)

*The setting is pitch black and all is heard is a creaking bed*

*The screen fades in from white to a muddy cave with a bed and a window with two mostquitoes on one bed*

Tyler mumbles:Oh god, again...

*Tyler wakes up Selena*

Tyler:Hey, baby, you gotta go.

Selena:What? You invited me here, and you're just going to kick me out?

Tyler:..........Yeah.

Selena:Well, tats just FUCKING fine. I always end up doing this, having sec with men JUST LIKE YOU!

*Selena leaves crying, as Tyler simply goes back to sleep*

(scene 2 ends here)
(Scene 3 Begins Here)

*The screen shows a 5 months later text and fades to black*

*The screen shows Tyler sitting up on his couch watching TV with a bowl of blood with fleshy chunks*

*Selena bursts through the front door with an angry face, and apparently pregnant*

Tyler:umm...

*Tyler drops his bowl in awe*

Selena: Don't pretend you didn't see this shit coming.

Tyler:aww shit.

*Tyler leaves without saying anything more*

Selena:Where the hell do you think you're going dammit?

Tyler:I'm going to relax, get off my back!

(scene 3 Ends here)
(Scene 4 begins here)

*From black, a highway street light fades in at a distance, where you can see many small bugs hovering around it*

*Tyler is among the other bugs here, getting "high"*

*His face is utterly blank and abnormal*

*The screen sits here for about ten seconds and instantly goes black*

(Scene 4 ends Here)
(Scene 5 begins here)

*The screen displays a five months later sign*

*From white a baby sees itself come out of a HUMAN mother's whoom, and as the screen flashes, it slowly changes from a doctor holding the baby to a mosquitoe maggot in a cup of water*

Selena:awwww

Tyler:..., Yeah, aw

Their doctor:You have a new baby boy, or girl. Whatever.

*The doctor walks away*

Selena:What should we name him?

Tyler:I dunno' god man!

Selena:Fine, fine. How about Temptress?

Tyler:What the Fuck? No, I'll name him, we'll call him... steven.

Selena mumbles:I liked temptress way more.

(Scene 5 ends here)
(Scene 6 begins here)

*The screen shows an eight years later sign*

*Selena and Steven ar on the living room watching television, when Tyler breaks the door down with his foot*

Tyler: GOD DAMMIT

*Selena quickly gets up as Steven steps to the back of the room*

Selena:What's wrong honey?

*Tyler seems a bit more calmed down*

Tyler:god... I lost my job at the blood bank today honey(pun :P)

*Tyler hangs his head in shame, and a tear falls from his face*

Selena:It's going to be okay, don't worry

*Tyler raises his head, showing a teary face, and quickly runs out and flies away*

Selena:Steven baby, please just go to your room for right now.

*Steven heads toward his room, and right out his bedroom window*

(Scene 6 ends here)
(Scene 7 begins here)

*The screen appears from black and shows Steven rapidly flying through the night with a night highway background*

*Steven gasps as he comes up to see a street light with only one mosquitoe near it, his dad*

*Steven begins to cry a little, because he's always known how deadly this is, he begins to fly to his father's aid*

*The screen shows a close-up of Tyler's face, and his eyes flicker, until he passes out, and from one spot, the camera watches him fall directly down onto a passing Semi*

*This falling scen replays from Stevens side angle*

*Steven stops mid-flight and begins bawling*

(Scene 7 ends here)
(Scene 8 begins here)

*The camera shows Stevens eyes blinking(he is the POV here)*

*Selena is heard crying, Steven has a blurry vision that slowly fades to the sight of a hospital room, and from Steven's POV, he passes out and all fades to black and the crying fades softly*

(Scene 8 ends here)
(Scene 9 begins here)

*The screen shows a two years later sign*

*From stevens POV, his eyes open, to show he was sleeping on the living room couch, his mother is arguing with two large men on the front porch*

*All outside goes silent after Selena's scream is heard, then the men fly away quickly*

*Steven runs to the door and before opening it, sees his mothers dead, stabbed body, sprawled out on the porch, he drops to the ground, tears cloud the camera's vision, and he passes out, with the camera screen turning instantly black*

(Movie one ends Here)

Unideted Verions

Reminder:At the current time:1:59AM central 7/9/09, I am in desperate need still of an artist for this film, as well as a voice actor, or of course, if possible, one person to complete both of these jobs. So, please keep in touch if you would liked to be involved in this.

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8 Comments

Jul. 6, 2009 | 3:23 AM Makeshift says:

sorry i couldn`t help.


Jul. 8, 2009 | 1:24 AM YouLostTheGame says:

All right, the story is definitely original, and certainly interesting, but I'm really not too great with Flash. I'm learning slowly but surely, and I'm sure that sometime in the future I'd be able to do it, but you'd have to wait I'm afraid. I'm definitely up for voice acting, though. Tell me how you'd like it animated, to start off, so I know what I need to work on.

Jul. 8, 2009 | 1:28 AM NinjaGuy responds:

Well, for animation, I want roughly drawn mosquitoes, if you've ever seen BarfQuestion's submissions, the character has a large lower leg, and i want that to be there, but brown, and have many short hairs, I want the characters to be fairly slim, and have thin greasy wings, with long thin noses, and a fairly clear exprssioned face. Also, I would like to give it the "hand drawn papery" effect BarfQuestion also uses, as for Voice Acting(VA) all spots are open, but there is competetion.


Jul. 8, 2009 | 11:54 AM micky315 says:

Why dont you animate yourself? most people dont like wrriters hiring animators round here.

my suggestion is, buy flash, practice, submit

you should atleast try!

Jul. 8, 2009 | 11:55 AM NinjaGuy responds:

... I did "atleast try" its in the newspost... That's why I'm getting animators...


Jul. 8, 2009 | 8:28 PM Tommy-Gun says:

I wish I could help you, man, but I find working with flash to be extremely frustrating and time-consuming. I have many other things on my plate to worry about right now, such as being recruited by a mod development team to make concept art for their mod, as well as having my summer job and getting my community hours (for highschool).

Aside from that, I think the least I can give you is feedback on your script so far. One thing you might want to work on is swearing. Although swearing can be good, over-doing it is not. You can leave a few cuss words in there, but I would recommend that you get rid of some. I also don't think that a character should kick his door down just because of loosing his job. One last thing, I believe that it might benefit you to merge some of the scenes together, since most of them are too short when standing alone.

Anyways, take what you will from my advice. I'm not really good at script writing, but I've done tons of short stories before and I thought that I could help you out a bit at least with this.

Jul. 8, 2009 | 9:19 PM NinjaGuy responds:

Thanks for your help, and the scene thing is for scene selct mostly.


Jul. 8, 2009 | 11:12 PM Erbmaster says:

Sorry Dude, but I'm already working on several projects already, Good Luck though.....


Jul. 9, 2009 | 7:34 AM xarugas03 says:

thanks for the offer but im not entirely confident with my skills being able to animate your script. For the main reason i haven't really begun doing character expressions and such. The story and idea are great, but my style may take away from the message you're trying to convey, while other animators may have the fitting/appropriate style for this script. :)


Jul. 16, 2009 | 7:46 PM Sh0ckFyre says:

Seems interesting. I could try the bartender.


Jul. 20, 2009 | 6:41 PM Leo3oproductions says:

there are two type's of flash (entertaining and touching) and a mosquito dying is niether.I'm sorry it's just a bad idea :(

Jul. 20, 2009 | 8:22 PM NinjaGuy responds:

Dang, no suggestions? Just a bad idea? ouch...

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